12月24日雅思寫(xiě)作task1回憶:中國(guó)石油生產(chǎn)和消耗情況對(duì)比

12月24日雅思寫(xiě)作task1回憶:中國(guó)石油生產(chǎn)和消耗情況對(duì)比

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 and 2006.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

*圖形根據(jù)考場(chǎng)回憶，具體信息略有出入

注：圖形根據(jù)考場(chǎng)回憶繪制，具體細(xì)節(jié)或有出入。

【圖形分類】

線形圖

【題目解析】

根據(jù)圖中信息，可以如下布局：

開(kāi)頭段：轉(zhuǎn)述題目；

綜述段：歸納兩條趨勢(shì)之間的異同；

主體段1：介紹第一階段的數(shù)據(jù)特征（區(qū)別有限）；

主體段2：介紹第二階段的數(shù)據(jù)特征（差距增大）。

【寫(xiě)作思路】

開(kāi)頭段：該圖提供了一個(gè)東方國(guó)家在25年間的石油產(chǎn)量和消耗量信息。

綜述段：總的來(lái)說(shuō)，兩個(gè)類別都有上升的趨勢(shì)，盡管消耗的上升幅度更大。

主體段1：最初的十年，這兩種趨勢(shì)之間相對(duì)平衡。具體而言，兩者早在1982年都處于每天200萬(wàn)桶的水平，屬于最低記錄。4年后，生產(chǎn)能力提高了50%，一直持續(xù)到1994年。這時(shí)，它被消耗量超過(guò)，而消耗量是在1990年后才開(kāi)始增長(zhǎng)的。

主體段2：上述的生產(chǎn)赤字在隨后幾年里進(jìn)一步擴(kuò)大。這時(shí)，由于對(duì)石油的需求不斷增加，在2006年急劇攀升到每天600多萬(wàn)桶，比1982年的數(shù)字大三倍。相反，這種強(qiáng)勁勢(shì)頭超出該國(guó)的產(chǎn)能提升，因?yàn)樵谕粫r(shí)期，產(chǎn)量只增加了50萬(wàn)桶。這意味著，到2006年為止，產(chǎn)量不足（每天200多萬(wàn)桶）的情況已經(jīng)大大惡化。

【參考范文】

The chart provides information about how much oil was output and used in an oriental country over the course of 25 years.

In general,there were upward trends in both categories,although more substantially in the case of consumption.

The initial decade saw a relative balance between the two trends.More specifically,both started at 2 million barrels per day in 1982,the lowest level recorded.This was followed by a 50%rise in the production capacity 4 years later,which continued at the same level until 1994.This was when it was surpassed by consumption,which had only started to grow after 1990.

The production deficit reported above further widened over the subsequent years.Here,due to an increasing demand for oil,there was a steep climb to over 6 million barrels per day in 2006,three times larger than the 1982 figure.Such growth momentum,on the other hand,was not matched by the country’s production,as it only rose by 0.5 million barrels over the same period.This means that by 2006,insufficient supply(over 2 million barrels per day)had worsened substantially.

(186 words)

【語(yǔ)言積累】

1.output(v.)產(chǎn)出

2.upward trends上升趨勢(shì)

3.categories類別

4.a relative balance相對(duì)平衡

5.production capacity產(chǎn)能

6.surpass超越

7.production deficit產(chǎn)能不足

8.a steep climb急劇攀升

9.growth momentum增長(zhǎng)勢(shì)頭

10.insufficient supply供給短缺

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