雅思G類寫作真題：說(shuō)明信

雅思G類寫作真題：說(shuō)明信，很多同學(xué)對(duì)于這個(gè)問(wèn)題有疑問(wèn)和不解，那么下面就跟著中國(guó)教育在線的小編詳細(xì)了解一下吧。

說(shuō)明信

Topic One

英格蘭和威爾士的三種犯罪行為數(shù)量

真題還原

After taking part in a training course, you need to

write a feedback letter to describe the courses

point out what you like

what should be further improved

題源分析

題干部分主要包括三點(diǎn)信息：描述你參加的培訓(xùn)課程，指出你喜歡的地方以及需要改進(jìn)的地方。在描述課程和指出喜愛(ài)之處時(shí)，要真實(shí)自然地突出課程的獨(dú)具特色之處，強(qiáng)調(diào)自己的主觀感受，而不能給人以矯揉造作之感。指出待改進(jìn)之處時(shí)，更是要注意語(yǔ)氣委婉誠(chéng)懇，切不可咄咄逼人。另外，在指出待改進(jìn)之處后，還要說(shuō)明改進(jìn)理由和提出相應(yīng)的改進(jìn)措施，理由要合情合理，措施也要妥當(dāng)可行。

推薦格式是：

第一段：說(shuō)明來(lái)信原因：對(duì)所參加的技能培訓(xùn)課程作出反饋。

第二段：詳細(xì)描述你喜愛(ài)該課程的地方：參加課程后你獲得許多有用技能;幫你

更好地勝任日常工作;專業(yè)熱情的老師的指導(dǎo)使你十分愉快。

第三段：指出培訓(xùn)課程有待改進(jìn)的地方，如課程設(shè)置應(yīng)凸顯學(xué)員的個(gè)人特點(diǎn)，周末安排更多的課程等。

第四段：對(duì)培訓(xùn)老師表示感謝，同時(shí)表達(dá)對(duì)該培訓(xùn)中心的良好祝愿。

其他參考觀點(diǎn)：

吸引你的地方：

1.培訓(xùn)教室環(huán)境舒適。

2.教學(xué)設(shè)備和體系很完善，服務(wù)優(yōu)質(zhì)。

3.學(xué)習(xí)氛圍良好，老師引導(dǎo)能力強(qiáng)，學(xué)員發(fā)言積極踴躍。

可以改進(jìn)的地方：

1.課程講解時(shí)，老師可以采取更豐富多樣的形式，如分組辯論等。

2.可以對(duì)某些課程進(jìn)行實(shí)地模擬練習(xí)，學(xué)以致用。

3.每次課程結(jié)束后，應(yīng)該安排相關(guān)人員及時(shí)收集反饋信息，當(dāng)學(xué)員遇到實(shí)際問(wèn)題時(shí)能夠得到及時(shí)解決，加強(qiáng)學(xué)習(xí)效果。

經(jīng)典范文欣賞

Dear Sir or Madam,

I'm writing this letter to let you know how pleased I am with the past one-month training on communication skills I participated in your center.

The course taught me how to work with body language, develop my listening and responding skills and gain confidence. I'm a manager in a big company Most people in business think they communicate pretty well, and in my experience that's generally true. However, even the best communicators can have their communication skills undermined when they get wrong-footed, face potential humiliation, or feel misunderstood. So this course is very useful for me and helps me become a good communication Teachers in your center are professional and enthusiastic, so under their guidance, I spent a pleasant and meaningful month there.

But I think there is room for further improvement in respect of the content and the timetable of this course. The course is interesting and excellent, but it should be designed according to personal styles of trainees. Then different trainees can find their most suitable training ways. As for the timetable, I suggest your center arrange more courses at weekends, for many businessmen like me are free only at weekends.

At last, I heartily thank the devoted teachers for their hard work. I look forward to seeing your more success in the near future.

Yours faithfully,

Nelson Clinton

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