寫(xiě)作老師經(jīng)驗(yàn)長(zhǎng)談 如何提升雅思寫(xiě)作水平之語(yǔ)法篇

隨著人們經(jīng)濟(jì)水平的提高，對(duì)于很多家庭來(lái)說(shuō)，留學(xué)不再是一個(gè)可望而不可及的事情，許多人都想要留學(xué)，那其中寫(xiě)作老師經(jīng)驗(yàn)長(zhǎng)談 如何提升雅思寫(xiě)作水平之語(yǔ)法篇？針對(duì)這個(gè)問(wèn)題，下面中國(guó)教育在線(xiàn)小編就來(lái)和大家分享一下。

1. The environment has been damaged severely, we need to protect our environment.

2. The air in rural areas is much better than urban areas.

3. There are two people sit there and talk with each other happily.

4. It is benefit to people if they could persist on exercise.

5. Knowing that students may be tempted from TV programs, it is important that students should be supervised by parents at home.

6. Government needs to protect our environment.

7. Teacher salaries rose from 70% in 1981 to 80% in 2001.

8, The number of married Americans reduced from 100000 in 1922 to 50000 in 1930.

9. The price of iPhone reached a peak which is 3400 rmb in 1990.

想好之后請(qǐng)翻到分割線(xiàn)以下查看答案

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1. The environment has been damaged severely, we need to protect our environment.

缺少and/so連接詞

2. The air in rural areas is much better than urban areas.

比較對(duì)象錯(cuò)誤

應(yīng)該是....better than that in urban areas.

3. There are two people sit there and talk with each other happily.

動(dòng)詞數(shù)量問(wèn)題(更深層次是非謂語(yǔ)錯(cuò)誤)

sit和talk都加ing

4. It is benefit to people if they could persist on exercise.

最簡(jiǎn)單粗暴但是很多同學(xué)犯的錯(cuò)誤

benefit改成beneficial

5. Knowing that students may be tempted from TV programs, it is important that students should be supervised by parents at home.

邏輯主語(yǔ)的問(wèn)題，逗號(hào)的后面應(yīng)該改成

......., parents need to supervise students at home.

6. Government needs to protect our environment.

government是可數(shù)名詞哦

7. Teacher salaries rose from 40% in 1981 to 50% in 1991.

40%和50%后面各加一個(gè)of the total school spending(來(lái)源自劍8T2T1)

8, The number of married Americans reduced from 100000 in 1922 to 50000 in 1930.

reduce表示的并不是具體數(shù)字的下降，改成簡(jiǎn)單的decline/decrease/drop即可

9. The price of iPhone reached a peak which is 3400 rmb in 1990.

不要使用定從去描述句子，你可以用with連接

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關(guān)于雅思寫(xiě)作的語(yǔ)法水平提升

腦袋里面暫時(shí)就想到了這九個(gè)小句子，如果你覺(jué)得可以輕松找到8個(gè)句子全部的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤所在，那么理論上來(lái)說(shuō)，你應(yīng)該是具備了6.5及6.5分以上分?jǐn)?shù)的語(yǔ)法水平，請(qǐng)注意我的措詞，僅僅是語(yǔ)法水平，但這個(gè)語(yǔ)法水平是必不可少的。如果有4~5個(gè)句子你可以比較輕松的找到問(wèn)題，那么6分的語(yǔ)法水平應(yīng)該是差不多的，這些問(wèn)題是找我批改的作文里面最容易出現(xiàn)的一些簡(jiǎn)單問(wèn)題(除了句子5稍微有一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)難)，避免這些可以幫助寫(xiě)作6.5分以下的同學(xué)提高0.5分左右，當(dāng)然，還有單詞的拼寫(xiě)、可數(shù)or不可數(shù)(這個(gè)其實(shí)對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)也是煩死人= =)以及主謂一致等小問(wèn)題，都要盡可能的避免。原來(lái)有個(gè)學(xué)生聽(tīng)了我的課，跑去跟助教說(shuō)“Panda老師說(shuō)了，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤是沒(méi)關(guān)系的，錯(cuò)了也不減分!”我聽(tīng)到助教的反饋之后表示很無(wú)奈，因?yàn)槲业脑?huà)是“如果你在一篇大作文or一篇小作文里面犯的所有錯(cuò)誤控制在3~4個(gè)，那么考官如果大發(fā)慈悲or眼神不太好，其實(shí)并不會(huì)減分”。我也發(fā)現(xiàn)有一些同學(xué)是只會(huì)聽(tīng)到對(duì)他們有利的話(huà)，至于是不是有條件or前提，他們不管= =那么如果是要求7or7以上的寫(xiě)作分?jǐn)?shù)，請(qǐng)你盡量保證整篇文章不要出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤吧親~

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