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很多同學(xué)都很關(guān)注2018加州系統(tǒng)文書寫作指導(dǎo)下這個(gè)問題，那么接下來就跟著中國教育在線小編一起來看看吧，相信你通過以下的文章內(nèi)容就會有更深入的了解。

Describe the most significant challenge you have faced and the steps you have taken to overcome this challenge. How has this challenge affected your academic achievement?

這一問題和上面的問題非常類似。再次強(qiáng)調(diào)，不要關(guān)注挑戰(zhàn)，而要關(guān)注自己克服挑戰(zhàn)的方式。如果你曾經(jīng)克服過一個(gè)巨大的挑戰(zhàn)，比如糟糕的家庭境遇，重大疾病，或者至親之人的離世，那么你可以描述出來。但如果你寫的是一個(gè)戲劇性的事情，要小心掉進(jìn)“贅述事情本身”這一陷阱。

This question is very similar to the previous question. Again, don’t focus on the challenge, focus on your response to it. If you are someone who has overcome a major challenge, such as a bad family situation, an illness, or the death of a loved one, then this is the place to write about that. But if you do write about a dramatic event, be careful to avoid the trap of writing more about the event than yourself.

問題六：描述你最喜歡的學(xué)科以及它是如何影響你的?

Describe your favorite academic subject and explain how it has influenced you.

這是我最喜歡的問題。如果你對某一學(xué)科充滿熱情，無論是學(xué)校里的課程還是自學(xué)的科目，你都應(yīng)該選擇這個(gè)問題。這個(gè)問題有利于展示你的求知欲望和個(gè)人觀念。

This is my favorite UC question. If you feel passionate about an academic subject, whether it is one you studied in school or on your own, then choose this prompt. This question is excellent for demonstrating intellectual curiosity and personal perspective.

明智的回答便是描寫細(xì)節(jié)，以此來證明你對于某一學(xué)科的熱愛。如果你喜愛生物學(xué)，那就描述這樣高雅美觀的內(nèi)容：只有當(dāng)鈣離子釋放時(shí)，肌肉才會收縮；而且它會根據(jù)我們的意圖來活動。如果你熱愛文學(xué)，那就描述出你最喜歡的莎士比亞的詩句。

A great response will mention specific details that prove your passion for a subject. If you like biology, describe how it so elegant and beautiful that muscles only contract when calcium ions are released, thereby allowing actin and myosin to bind when we want them to. If you love literature, describe your favorite puns from Shakespeare.

接下來描述對這一學(xué)科的熱愛，是如何塑造了你的觀念。如果是生物學(xué)，就描述當(dāng)你在體育館時(shí)，大腦是如何給肌肉發(fā)送信號的。如果是文學(xué)的話，就描述當(dāng)你的一位朋友深深迷戀上了樂隊(duì)里的一個(gè)女孩，他夢幻般的眼神緊緊盯著樂團(tuán)建筑時(shí)，你想到了蓋茨比凝視著黛西碼頭盡頭的綠燈。

Then demonstrate how this has shaped your perspective. For biology, describe how, when you work out at the gym, you imagine your brain sending signals to sarcomeres. For literature, describe how your friend has a crush on a girl in the orchestra, and when he stares dreamily at the orchestra building, you imagine Gatsby gazing at the green light at the end of Daisy’s dock.

問題七：為了你所在的學(xué)校和社團(tuán)變得更好，你做了哪些貢獻(xiàn)？

What have you done to make your school or your community a better place?

不要列舉簡歷里的那些無趣的個(gè)人經(jīng)歷。要談?wù)撃切┠愀信d趣的集體話題。

DON’T just list some boring things you did to add to your resume. DO talk about community issues that you are passionate about.

例如，說說你喜歡藝術(shù)的原因，并解釋一下藝術(shù)是高中教育中一個(gè)至關(guān)重要的部分。緊接著談?wù)撘幌履銥槭裁匆谝粋€(gè)教室里設(shè)立學(xué)生藝術(shù)館，以及你為此戰(zhàn)勝的挑戰(zhàn)。最后，給出一些具體的成果，比如提供藝術(shù)作品的學(xué)生人數(shù)，或者是學(xué)校社團(tuán)給出的一些積極的回應(yīng)。

For example, explain why you love the arts and why you think they are such an essential part of a high school education. Then explain why you chose to set up a student art gallery in one of your school’s classrooms, and how you overcame challenges to achieve that. In the end, give some specific results, such as the number of students who contributed artworks, or some of the positive responses from the school community.

問題八：列舉一件能夠讓你區(qū)別于其他加州大學(xué)申請者的事。

What is the one thing that you think sets you apart from other candidates applying to the University of California?

這是最開放的一個(gè)問題，可能也是最重要的一個(gè)。即使你沒有選擇這個(gè)問題，我也建議你試著去回答一下。因?yàn)樽屢粋€(gè)學(xué)校接受你的申請（或者是在求職過程中），最重要的部分就是讓你和你的競爭者區(qū)別開來。把這個(gè)問題當(dāng)作回答其他問題的參考。

This is the most open-ended question and maybe the most important. Even if you don’t use this question, I recommend you try to answer it. Because an essential part of convincing a college to accept you (or an essential part of applying for a job) is differentiating yourself from your competition. Use this prompt as a way to prepare to answer the other prompts.

你的回答應(yīng)該展示出自己的個(gè)性、觀點(diǎn)以及自我意識。事實(shí)上，這個(gè)問題和普通的申請文書很相似。如果你已經(jīng)準(zhǔn)備好了一篇很棒的申請文書，那就試著從中摘取一些內(nèi)容來回答這個(gè)問題。

Your answer should demonstrate personality, perspective, and self-awareness. In fact, this is pretty similar to the essay you might write for the Common Application. If you have already written a good Common App essay, see if you can cut some words and use it here.

重點(diǎn)在于：選擇關(guān)于你自己的有趣的事情。談?wù)撃愕呐d趣、古怪的家人，或者你早晨一定會做的事。如果是展現(xiàn)你的個(gè)性，那么就談一下你的才能或者成就。

Important: Choose something interesting about your personal identity. Talk about a hobby, your strange family, or your morning routine. Only talk about a talent or achievement if it reveals something about your personality.

無論你選擇哪些問題，都要記住，回答要具體明確，娓娓道來。確保你的回答能夠涵蓋你的四個(gè)不同的方面。不要寫兩個(gè)表現(xiàn)領(lǐng)導(dǎo)力的答案，這太浪費(fèi)了。

Whichever prompts you choose, remember to tell a story and be specific! And make sure your four responses show four different sides of you. Don’t write two responses that only demonstrate leadership. That’s a waste.

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